You

You

A Poem by Laura Kate

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set about putting me back together 
before I even knew 
that some of my pieces 
had broken

© 2019 Laura Kate


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This reminds me of an old friend who couldn't accept me the way I was. He wanted to change my hairstyle, my clothes, in fact virtually everything. I decided he couldn't really like me and we parted company. Some people find fault where there is none.

Chris

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Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laura Kate

5 Years Ago

Hi Chris. This is a very interesting perspective which I hadn't considered. Thank you for sharing yo.. read more



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The right combination of one wearily unaware and her bright-eyed seer can make for a most wondrously beautiful relationship, indeed … especially, when discovering they need each other in deeper ways than could have been perceived at first blush.

Wonderfully rendered, L'aura, both in meaningful thought and emotional impact …
thank you ever-so warmly for sharing! ⁓ Richard 🍃

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Posted 4 Years Ago


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Richard🖌

4 Years Ago

I'm happy to still be one of your readers. : )
Laura Kate

4 Years Ago

I appreciate it Richard. Will make sure to visit your page again soon :)
Richard🖌

4 Years Ago

I'll be excitedly waiting, Sarah ♬😏
what a connected person to connect your pieces together it sounds as if it was welcomed once realized true friends are there for you

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Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laura Kate

5 Years Ago

That's a great observation, and quite true as well. Thank you
This reminds me of an old friend who couldn't accept me the way I was. He wanted to change my hairstyle, my clothes, in fact virtually everything. I decided he couldn't really like me and we parted company. Some people find fault where there is none.

Chris

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laura Kate

5 Years Ago

Hi Chris. This is a very interesting perspective which I hadn't considered. Thank you for sharing yo.. read more
some people just sense the need in others....

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laura Kate

5 Years Ago

You're right Jacob, healers perhaps ...

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Added on April 8, 2019
Last Updated on September 2, 2019
Tags: Prose, lobe

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Laura Kate
Laura Kate

United Kingdom



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A Poem by Laura Kate