Do You Need Me?

Do You Need Me?

A Poem by Love Is Dead

            These days,
         i swear you don't need me.
       i have to ask you something,
      do you need me? I don't understand
              why you ignore me
                  meanwhile
               it's just one question.
            and you treat me like nothing,
    and you just ignore.
           im not sure,
               if this is who you really are
       i just wonder if you just hear what im saying.
                     Can you?
             



© 2010 Love Is Dead


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I loved this! Wonderful poem. You portrayed your emotions wonderfully. Keep it up. You can be a very successful writer one day

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ah.. falling in love alone, a painful heart ache, and the way you portrayed it is simple but again, beautiful. You did good. Keep it up.
-Cathrine

Posted 11 Years Ago


It makes me fear being in a stone-still relationship, where you know its going to be over but the only clue to it is the silence, and secrets because that is what definitely happens if one person feels uneeded. Good job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


It sounds really good except in one part, it sounds a bit off topic, not even off topic, just the fact that there's something missing... The part where it's like
"you ignore,
your tone of voice,
it's just one question."
That's the part where it confused me... Did he yell at you? Did he get really upset? Just giving you something to think about, because I was a bit lost there. But again overall it was a good poem, with good meaning and emotion...
:D

Posted 11 Years Ago



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For me there's not much to say really.I guess i like writing? I just need some practice though. Im just a poem writer. (/ /) (o.0) .. more..

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