A Poem by Love Is Dead

                         Every little mistakes
               we have done,
               all shatter in pieces.

              All we have done this whole time,
              ruined the world.
              One little mistake,
              is a big situation
              everyday it happens
              we all go apart.

             Life is a risk
             and we never learn.

            Our minds are crazy,
            we brought ourselves
            pain and cruelty.

           Life isn't a waste,
           but it's a game
          we all play it
          even when we don't know it.

          We feel doubt
           we feel depressed.
                       Everyday is a game.


© 2010 Love Is Dead

Author's Note

Love Is Dead
ignore grammar problems,just look at the poem.

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I enjoyed this so much it makes me feel AMAZING!!!!!!!!! hahaha!!1 :)

Posted 13 Years Ago

extremely poignant painting of human beings who've turned into little automatons of selfish drives without a thought as to how they role the dice and what their next move will be~ they've handed over thinking for destructive comfort which is anything but at the end~

Posted 13 Years Ago

I really liked this :]

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on August 2, 2010
Last Updated on August 2, 2010


Love Is Dead
Love Is Dead

For me there's not much to say really.I guess i like writing? I just need some practice though. Im just a poem writer. (/ /) (o.0) .. more..

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A Poem by Love Is Dead