Near

 
We are near to be ending the world
I am not excited nor happy,
i am just being normal
because we are gonna pass away soon
when we are old,young,or teenager years
People might be sad people might feel bad
But me,im just fine im acting normal
I might miss being alive but the world is gonna be in good hands
once we go and  once all the animals go.

Soon another type of people or something will come and take care of the world
and we all would be in heaven or hell.                                     

Author's Note

be honest on how you thought of this poem

Reviews

[Randolf Ramos]

I think you are self actualized enough to think that death is inevitable, i been on the same thinking that inspite of our effort to study to work to have a family there is death undeniably creeps through on our due time, the best thing is that we have shown to the world that we took flesh and been here, we are present, the defining importance in us is the legacy that we will leave behind... I already done my part as a person, I planted trees on our town! it is in my poem SOul within a dream, dream within a soul. Please read my poem and give some reviews, We have the same thinking about death! and that is a great feeling to know how ready we are to face death! keep it up!keep on writing! this is a great piece.

[Joshua Donahue]

i thought this poem was very honest in all forms. it scares me to think of the future and how humanity will end one day. i want to know if the earth will shrivel up and die or will other life forms take over? or if there are even other life forms out there? who knows? maybe when we are all gone the cycle of life will begin again and we will start back over with the caveman, only without the sun, trying to find a new source of energy since this lifetime of humans isn't obviously working out because of all our fighting and greed over land instead of sharing and nurturing the earth as it dies. but then again, who knows, right?
wow. that wasn't even a review. but honestly, i love this poem. very nice and contains such honesty! love it!

[Taylor H.]

I thought it was a little too upsetting for me but It was great if i looked away from that.

[Addie]

Very nice and very true. Gives a different outlook on death than just "scary". I like it =)

[Ashley June Canfield]

I love this.

[RTB]

that was contreversal becaise the ideas of missing liveing and being scared and wut not was kind of fearfull great poem it portrayed imagery and was overall great

[Bard Constantine]

This isn't a bad piece, but it feels... flat somehow, stripped down to the basics, which may have been what you were aiming for. My suggestion would be to give the words a little flair for impact, which would add power to this piece. Just a thought. Keep writing...

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

a dark pondering made almost acceptable by the straightforward and easy presentation of death as an inevetable force in your poem~ I was raised to view the beginning the middle and the end of our story as a celebration~ none of it to be feared but accepted as a simple continuation on a journey~ =)~

[nono]

Love it people have there own ways of doing how they want. And this poem just shows how people should just pretend nothing is going to happen and live their life's normal like it could be there last. But you know on December 22nd 2012 we're supposed to have just an eclipse. I think it would be kinda cool actually. Nice Job! love the poem.

[Randolf Ramos]

Near the sea,
I filled the earth with fan leaf tree
To give chirping robins a clasp, and hide
Late the day, one enjoys the ebbs of tide

Someday, one could tell what nature be
a dream that stays with me
All worries, pressure of the day subside
The future of the unborn child

Under which a soul could rest
From crux, a tortured crest
This place hath done whats fair
Epitaph of my sweet ember's care

Dream is noble for the soul
Whose soul dream not
Faint -hearted dream it is without soul
and soul it is that dream, if by dream is soul we ennoble

I dream and filled the earth today
Hoped that dream would always stay
The time will I expire and rest on the ground
My dream will grow, stand, and live this land

This is my poem