"Dead Or Alive"

LOVE...

Is A Word That I Foolishly Grasp...

Hoping To Be Happy...

Still Pretending To None...

Is My Only Chance To Be ALIVE...

Even Thought I'm Already DEAD...

Feeling Its Warmth...Even Thought I'm COLD

 I'm DEAD...Please..Don't Go..

Sadly..Fading Into The Deep Abyss Of Destiny

Author's Note

Sorry If I'm Still Foolish I English Words..

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Love can make us feel dead or alive. I believe many types of love. Some love is easy. Love for family and children. Hard love is two adults twisting emotion and forgetting to be kind. The dead part confused me. A interesting poem.
Coyote

[Raven Starhawk]

I liked the color concept. It gave this poem a flavor that helped to guide me along, but the most impressive part was the words that you composed. They were something that coursed through my mind like a fairytale though one filled with angst and dilemma.

[FelicityAllona]

^^

[=Kirakishou=]

Haha...Sorry...The N Is Missing...