Please Me Lover (English Version)

please me lover
tempt me
hold me
taste me
kiss me lover
beg me
feel me
want me
hear me lover
moaning
groaning
owning you
come to me lover
see me
talk to me
using signs
entice me lover
I am yours

Reviews

[Ruby Moon]

lol...i got to say you can have lovers from all around the world
maybe i just hate malay but i think your english version is much better...
more passionate, the malay one sounds a bit formal

[Jenny Davis]

This is such a passionate write, I can tell it came from the heart...very nicely written! :)

[J]

You should Evoca this, perhaps? Haha. So, how many languages do you speak? I notice you have lots of different translations... that must've been an effort.

Yes, very heartfelt and romantic.
J

[Vatsayayana]

This is stunning in its simplicity.
It pulls at my heart.
Who hasn't asked for a lover to do such as this?
Your prose is beautiful.
Brava!