chapter 1

It was cold and I was flying again. The wind was wiping in my ears and the dusky sky streched out in front of me. I could hear the soilders chasing me thierry feet pounding on the ground like thunder. I Hurd a gunshot. And I was falling. They had skimmed my wing, just enough to make me fall. My heart was in my throught, struggling to flap them to stay up. Oh god! I'm going to actuly fall actuly get captured and die. After everything. I shut my eyes tight preparing for the splat. Then I felt arms gripping me. And a swoosh of wings. I opened my eyes to see a clocked figure head down caring me. "Igan! That god! I would have died!" I said. He didn't respond or even look up. "You could at least say your welcome." I told him. His hood blew off and the first thing I saw was a mess of light brown hair. "Drop me." I said turning my head.

Reviews

[Archia]

I think this first chapter is a really hook, I already want to know more about all of this. I just have one question, this is book 2, so have you already written a first book? Also I know you said to ignore spelling and grammar errors but I would suggest putting this through a spell checker; you can find them on the internet if you need to. It would make it easier to read. But, a very enticing chapter. I really want to know what this is about, and actually who this person is that caught them and they don't like it. Very exciting.