Leave

Your kiss

Your hugs

Sends shivers down my spine

I go weak at the knees

I can  but help dream

About you every night

You finger tips across my lips

Your sweet voice

I feel so cold without you

What would I do without you?

I would crumble and die

Disappear into thin air

If you love me so much

Why did you leave?

Reviews

[Adela Muresan]

It's a kowel way for describing the passing form love to sadness.

I have to say, you refer to the guy as some sort of treasure � they really eight's worth much� even if they awaken love within us.

A.M.

[Jo Anna Bella]

An experience experienced by many.
Just need a little editiig, Like maybe 'I can' is I can't (or mayb that's your intent)

All in all, this is a question one wrestles with.

Thanks

[WoFer]

ok so... what are you saying, why are you writing. what is it you are trying to get across?

[Crazy Cat Man]

this is a great piece but theres a reason why some of us guys leave......becuz we got what we wanted....we did the right things..we pretended to be sweet...and once we got what we want...we move on to the next. Thats the mentality of the young, selfish and horny. great piece.