You are so cruel and mean

This is more like a prose poem than a poem actually.. fair warning ...

In this silence night

I was alone

with no one to hold

 

Now, I realize

That he has gone

Leaving me with nothingness

 

I just wish we could go back

Just like the old times

You're the only one that I love

And your shadow will always live in my heart

 

Why does this happened to me?

I don't beleive that you're already gone

Must I go to the end of the world

Just to see you again?

 

I know that this distance will make our love go stronger

But It hurt so bad I can't take it any longer

 

Why? Why did you leave me with this pain?

Why don't you just kill me already?

 

Where are you?......

My heart is longing for you..

Searhing for you...

Wanting to see you ... again....

 

My heart is fragile

Because it was broken before

I don't think it could endure another pain

Do you want me to be in pain again?

 

You're so cruel.. mean...jerk...

Are you just toying with my feelings?

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Author's Note

thank you for reading what do you think of it?

Reviews

[Wildecat]

Kudos to you a great write.

[Destiny]

*sobbing* that was so...*growling* that jerk! sorry but man, he'd be schtupid to leave a girl like you behind! If i knew the guy, I'd be kicking his butt till he came back and spent the rest of his life with ya!

[Elana Juli Royson]

The grammatic errors aside, I think it is well written and portrays the real emotions of those in the same position. Kudos. Keep writing.