Oprtetsypaa

Chaos, confusion, meaningless all!

Chaos, confusion, sound upon sound!
Meaningless, meaningless, nothing at all!
Chaos, confusion, lose control of your mind!
Oprtetsypaa, oprtetsypaa, tnxfet rx ryy!

And everything lost
And nothing is found
And the voices all cry
They scream, they shout out!

Meaningless, meaningless, nothing at all!
Oprtatsypaa, oprtetsypaa, tnxfet rx ryy!

Author's Note

The 'nonsense words' are actually the second line, with every letter replaced by a random one, but consistently. So all -t- become -x-, etc.
Ironically, the nonsense line was the hardest to come up with, I'm still not happy with the one I chose, but it's the closest I got to fitting in with the rest of the poem.

Reviews

[d]

this a good thing. i think it needs a little work but it's great so far. it is not every other poem.

[AndyJCash]

This is interesting and I like the unique idea of the "nonsense words" to add emphasis to the confusion and what not :)

[Alewis]

i like it i actually understand the meaning