One Grain

One Grain is one of my first audio poems, and many say one of my best. it is completely Free!

Can't wait to get some more feed back!

Reviews

[Marie Anzalone]

Thanks for sharing this with me, Lucien. I did enjoy it very much. Reminds me a little of a book I read recently, "The Universe in a Single Atom" by the Dalai Lama. Sometimes, I go to the Museum of Natural History in NYC, and walk the respective halls to pass through time, from earliest life to the fishes to the dinosaurs to the Ice Age mammals, and I just stand in wonder of it all, how it all came to pass that these things gave way, these wondrous things, and here I stand, with the sentience to take it in. It is mind-boggling. I think that maybe this is similar to what you were trying to capture here?

You have a great voice for reading aloud, too, and a nice cadence.

[Mark]

But we must not forget, despite this, that without solitary grains, there would be no beaches, and without individual molecules, there would be no oceans! We cannot denigrate the importance of the individual to the whole, only his scale.

[James Paulin]

I love this poem...significance in vast insignificance. Powerful perspective

[Mel]

Very profound and intelligent. Nicely done!

[Ellusive Rose]

Oh cool! I listened to it. It was awesome! I didn't know you could do things like that! I like the poem itself too. Anyway all in all, it was really good!