Girls Like You (The Spotlight)

Girls Like You (The Spotlight)

A Poem by Luciole

About the pretty takeover in society. Enjoy.

Don't you know people will get bored of you?
And when that happens, what will you do?
You love the way people always stare,
Whenever you show up anywhere.
So what happens when that all goes away,
And no one has anything else to say?
What if you lost all of your beauty?
What if there was nothing else for the world to see?
What is society to do with girls like you?
-The only thing they can think to...
Allow you to be conceited and stand there, tall and glowing bright,
And just let you, for as long a you can, have the spotlight. 

© 2012 Luciole

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I loved this. I hate girls like that. It isn't all about them. They need to realize that there is other people in the world too. Conceited people begin to annoying me after a while because they just want the attention. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago

I loved this, it's so true. I can't stand girls who're conceited and think they're all that, and unfortunately there's a lot of those girls around. great poem =]

Posted 11 Years Ago

I like it :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

This is very nice and though simple, very thought provoking!

You've got yourself a new fan!


Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That's very interesting! And it does describe what a lot of people think, and stuff some people should learn. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

NIce :) I like it

Posted 11 Years Ago

This is good and describes something a lot of people should learn

Posted 11 Years Ago

This was really good and I agree, spreads a very good message. The rhyme was really is on the tongue... or at least, the minds tongue. Your poem flows beautifully, I really like it. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

fantastic message!

reminds me of one of my old friends actually.

you wrote this well

Posted 11 Years Ago

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I love the message here. I gravitate toward pieces with a message but fear the rhyme scheme here infringes on that message.

Hope to read more of your work at another time.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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14 Reviews
Added on April 3, 2012
Last Updated on April 13, 2012
Tags: conceited, full of yourself, girls, truth, society, pop culture, its curse



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