Birds

Birds

A Poem by Lucy Granger

Birds,
The symbol of peace,
The symbol of birth,
They deliver the next generation,
They show it that peace is a virtue.
Between every feathers, they hold love, peace and care;
and make sure to spread their wings as far as possible to spread the feelings.
They protect us, they look over us from the sky.
they protect our skies,
they protect our planet.

© 2017 Lucy Granger


Author's Note

Lucy Granger
First poem, hope you enjoy.

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I agree with 60 stations wagon kung fu - this is lazy and perhaps too vanilla.
I look forward to your next piece.


Posted 7 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Wow. That is such a beautiful poem! I really enjoyed reading this and I hope you post more poems. Keep writing! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You are delightful in spirit but this is lazy poetry.

Some people dig the non rigid thing.

But still, lazy. You're form is... jelly. Try harder. (good work though... I like you)

Posted 7 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I enjoyed reading this poem! You made me look at birds in the most beautiful way!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wow! I really liked this poem. It just made me think about birds for the past 10 minutes. Good work! Keep writing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Really like this. It's so simple, delicate, refreshing. Good job!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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