Forgotten.

Forgotten.

A Poem by La Luna

I have forgotten what innocence feels like. I have forgotten what me feels like.
If there was part of me that was a little human, I would cry in a crowded place, and run after buses, because to me everything feels a little crazy. And I wish I could come down to earth and grow flowers, instead of fighting dragons and chasing angels.


© 2014 La Luna


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La Luna
Inspired by my little nephew. :)

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This ones painful. I don't know but it made my heart break a little. "and run after buses" that line means something, I like it. Though(and you can ignore this) I feel like I would have liked it if you said "and I wish I 'could'..." because its written in 'ifs' and 'woulds'. I just feel that a 'could' would flow better. I like the work, and the fighting dragons/chasing angels image is very well written. I like the interesting concept of the fantasy world being the one without innocence and the other being innocent, very original! Thank you for writing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

La Luna

9 Years Ago

That's actually a great idea, I was struggling with that bit myself. And yes I guess everything mean.. read more



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This ones painful. I don't know but it made my heart break a little. "and run after buses" that line means something, I like it. Though(and you can ignore this) I feel like I would have liked it if you said "and I wish I 'could'..." because its written in 'ifs' and 'woulds'. I just feel that a 'could' would flow better. I like the work, and the fighting dragons/chasing angels image is very well written. I like the interesting concept of the fantasy world being the one without innocence and the other being innocent, very original! Thank you for writing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

La Luna

9 Years Ago

That's actually a great idea, I was struggling with that bit myself. And yes I guess everything mean.. read more

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La Luna
La Luna

London, United Kingdom



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