i shall return

i shall return

A Poem by Lydia Shutter

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the night wears a negligee of silk
draped over her curves
her radiant stars twinkling
in all the right places
certainly you are drawn to her
she reaches out to you
through crevices of desire
spreading her luxuriant sensuality
into your most secret dreams
she cradles a special message
bathe in her glistening essence
feed on her words
for i am the one who sent her 
                      je renverrai mon amour

© 2013 Lydia Shutter


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This poem is packed with your usual flowing coaxing allure (with word choices I admire) . . . and then the last 4 lines send me on a different tangent . . . especially your last line, it piques such a plethora of ideas tumbling forth! Hope you're enjoying the autumn vibes! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

1 Year Ago

Oh, Margie, this one is five years old! I wrote it in summer and really anytime is right for a roma.. read more
barleygirl

1 Year Ago

I love it when an old one is stirred into the newsfeed mix! *smile*
Lydia Shutter

1 Year Ago

Me too! It makes the words brand new again.




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I thought lydi decided to be sweet and post more of her work heheh... wonderful one :)
Now a happy sat night

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

1 Year Ago

This is an oldie, Ardra, but the words never expire! :) Thanks for the review. Lydi**
This poem is packed with your usual flowing coaxing allure (with word choices I admire) . . . and then the last 4 lines send me on a different tangent . . . especially your last line, it piques such a plethora of ideas tumbling forth! Hope you're enjoying the autumn vibes! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

1 Year Ago

Oh, Margie, this one is five years old! I wrote it in summer and really anytime is right for a roma.. read more
barleygirl

1 Year Ago

I love it when an old one is stirred into the newsfeed mix! *smile*
Lydia Shutter

1 Year Ago

Me too! It makes the words brand new again.

Hey, I just checked and August 26th 2013 was not a Friday.. it was a Monday here in the UK... any chance of posting one of these every night Lydi**... bon apetit... Neville

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago

Sshhh, just dont tell the missus okay x
Lydia Shutter

1 Year Ago

If you don't tell my hubby! LOL
Neville

1 Year Ago

Deal............ x
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Gorgeous little piece Lydi...wonderfully sensual :) x

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Raven. Lydi**
What an exquisite opening line, you had me hooked Lydie! Love this, it so glistens on the page....

'je renverrai mon amour' translated as 'I would refer my love', not sure that's what you meant exactly but the intention came through with or without....

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

Actually, it means, "I will send my love", Frieda...and that is what I meant to say. Thank you for .. read more
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

I figured something like that, you can never trust the translation, love it all the same, my pleasur.. read more
This sensual write makes me want to listen some Edith Piaf, one of my favorite French singers of all time. Your beautiful words bring out the French in all of us. Another keeper for me Lydi.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

Oh, yes, Edith Piaf was one of the great chanteuses! Merci beaucoup, mon ami! :) Lydi**
feed on her words for I am the one who sent her. Exquisite this night personified.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your comments. Lydi**
This one speaks to me as if you sended a hollywood star to someone, but one with Class, I imagine some older woman, who hit the charts in that time, like Brigitte Bordeaux, she came instantly up in my mind, it has a cool feeling of nostalgy here mixed with the romance you do always so well... and a bit of glammour... your roots I felt here... so loved it...

- Elisa

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

Oh what a lovely comment you have left for me, my friend. Tthank you so much. Lydi**

7 Years Ago

The pleasure was all mine my sweet friend xxx
What lovely images your beautiful words create. A fantastic write, as always. Margaret

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

Always a pleasure to see your smiling face on my page, Margaret. Thank you so much. Lydi**
A spectacular night indeed, Lydi. And yes, I and many ohers will keep returning to your page to read your very special poetry that sings of romance.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Joyce. You are a special lady. Lydi**

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