Remember

ahhh...romance....we never forget

“Arising” by Richard Johnson

A quiescent day
no fizz or bubble
to the languishing minutes
as they crawl into hours
so my mind wanders
to a place where
similes sang
poetry partied and purred
the house hummed
and you touched my very soul
with a simple wink
if you were here
you would shave off
the day’s beard of ennui
with your razor sharp joi de vivre
yes opaque images dance
on this quiescent day
and you best believe
mon amour
I will never forget
to remember

Author's Note

just a bit of romantic fantasy

Reviews

[NeiL ArandA]

This piece is full of flavorful words . I learned some new words today . I love romance and romantic stories . Its really nice to reminisce those moments back in time when were in love and the world is ours . I'll never forget such time in our life when we are drunk with wine . From the winepress of Venus . I love these lines " to a place where simile sang and poetry partied and purred ". ...Sounds like love letters to me sealed with a kiss ... Thanks for posting and enjoyed the read .

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Neil. I appreciate your warm words. Lydi**

[Dara]

A beautiful way to start the new year, Lydi. I have not been online for awhile and suddenly realize how much I have missed your poetry. I hope your New Year is off to a fantastic start. Take care! Dara

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks, Dara. Happy New Year to you too. lydi**

[paddy d daly]

a beautiful poem, compact, clever and very touching

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks, Paddy. Lydi**

[Ruth]

Ohh...superb...
Romance has never been more elegantly voiced Lydi. I always look forward to pausing with you...you inspire me :) x

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks very much, Poppy. Lydi**

[Ruth]

Always my pleasure dear Lydi x

[Joyce S. Greene]

Beautifully written poetry, Lydi. Your words, indeed, "partied and purred" and "you touched my very soul." You are truly a gifted poet!

[Lydia Shutter]

You've really started off my day with a huge smile, Joyce. I appreciate your reviews so much. Lydi**

[wordman]

memories,fantacys of yesterday you can always go back in time through the portals of your mind

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Ron. Lydi**

[Bri]

This is beautiful, I love it. You have a great way of explaining things.
Well done, friend.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much. Lydi**

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

I always wanted to read romantic fantasies. LOL

"I will never forget
to remember"...I would tell that a thousand times to myself. Thank you for this splendid piece, Lydi.
You're one of the best romantic fantasy writers here who touched my soul. I admire your pieces like this.
Keep it up!

[Lydia Shutter]

Dh, thank you so much for your lovely review. Have a great weekend...and never stop loving romantic fantasies. Lydi**

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

You're welcome. =)

[Jack...]

Lydi my sweet friend, who on earth would want to forget? You bring us dancing to your poetic rhthym in this beautiful piece. Dreaming on this one.

[Lydia Shutter]

Sweet dreams, Jack....may you sleep well. Thank you for your lovely review. Lydi**

[Frieda P]

Languishing moments of poetry partying and purring...oooh oui, oui, oui again~! Seriously, what could be better than that? Never forget to remember is memorable, and I've putting this one on the top shelf to read again...sweet one Lydikey.....

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Frieda....oui, c'est vrais....we must always remember moments such as these...even if they are only in our fantasies! LOL Lydi**

[Frieda P]

You and your sexy French making me google again. ;-) Yes it's true, I have a few real moments intermingled with hot fantasy...! hahaha Always my pleasure you sweet woman, you.

[Lydia Shutter]

Laughing here....I guess I should offer a translation when I throw in French or Dutch words, sorry. Good thing Google cooperates. Have a great weekend, Frieda. Lydi**

[Frieda P]

As long as the translation is right, you never know, you could have been cursing for all I know lol You too Lydi, and thanks again...

[Lydia Shutter]

Me? Curse? Wait, let me adjust my halo here! LOL

[Frieda P]

Those are usually the only words I know in other languages hahaha I thought I saw that halo slip~~!

[Lydia Shutter]

:) going to sign off soon....time for dinner. later**

[Frieda P]

Ciao ciao Lidykey, buon appetito.

[Joiedevivre]

oh my, the ending makes a massive impact, at least in me. I can hear the passion and the longing rising. This is one of your best, chock-a-block with powerful lines and feeling, bravo Lydi!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Joie. Not getting too many reviews on this one so i really appreciate you taking the time. Lydi**