you have me

artwork by Tony Max

courtesy of etsy.com

through arms of afternoon
you have me
way past warm
i burn
into ashes of desire
you breathe sex
through lips
longing to be covered by mine
bending closer to passion’s voice
i admit it
my soul is thirsty
oh yes, you have me

Reviews

[David Scott]

Again, you show classy sensuality. You do have a gift for this. I did not want to blush or feel uncomfortable, but I had no doubt the level of passion and desire you were relaying to the reader.
Happy Freakin New Year Baby!!!
Smoke em if ya got em.

[Lydia Shutter]

I am actually laughing out loud here...smoke if you got em indeed! You have a way with words, David. Happy New Year to you too! :) thanks for the review. Lydi**

[NeiL ArandA]

David Scott said it too . I was not the only one who noticed it . Your writing style and piece has classy touch . First time I read your poem Ifelt like Iwas having a romantic dinner inside Buckingham Palace . Its very elegant .

[Lydia Shutter]

WOW....thank you, Neil. You made my evening. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

Best days and nights. Is when all we have are locked doors and desire to swim in. I like the places and the hunger in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, Coyote. I appreciate your reviews. Lydi**

[Karmel]

Wow gorgeous poem heavy with sensuality! really enjoyed it and your approach to the subject. Very well written :-)

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, Karmel. Lydi**

[Ruth]

Good lord! I am a few degrees warmer...now that's a blessing in Winter lol Lovely! x

[Lydia Shutter]

Giggling here...you sure have read a lot of my words today. Stay warm, Poppy. thanks. Lydi**

[Ruth]

I shall, you too love, and I have enjoyed x

[MsJewel]

Sensual, passionate and sexy as hell Lydi and as always written with the elegance that is "you". I love the painting as well. Stunning my friend.

:) Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Julie. I appreciate the review. Lydi**

[Sanober]

Ahh...a slow burning afternoon....as only you could bring to life. Your sensual poems always 'have me', too. Exquisitely written...my friend. An absolute treat to read.

[Lydia Shutter]

:) glad you liked. Thank you very much, Sanober. Lydi**

[MAC]

you again display soft beauty even is this sensual write

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much. Lydi**

[Cassie]

awwwwww!!!!!!! this one needs shelving, I loved it.

[Lydia Shutter]

I am honored, Cassie. Thank you. Lydi**

[Faithfuldream]

Very strong emotions displayed in this short poem. Clear message and written to be understood by the reader.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much. Lydi**

[Lyn Anderson]

A sensual, sexy piece, well penned.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much. Lydi**