then there was you

circumstance and time change everything

artwork by tony mazza 

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"u were gone so long
time wore on us
like a corrosive emulsion"
A nice journey in your words. I like the one time temptress turning to a memory. I like the about lines a lot. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lydia Shutter]

Just as your poetry shows, memories provide much inspiration. Thank you so much, my friend. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Lydia.

[Lyn Anderson]

Again, a beautiful poem, accepting the good and the bad of the past with grace and understanding.

[Lydia Shutter]

I truly appreciate you catching up like this. Lydi**

[Corset]

A soldiers life and wife, how hard that must be on both, you think your love can withstand anything, even the test of time, oft times not but there is always that little piece that you carry of them inside you. Beautiful writing Lydi, sad and yet gorgeous at the same time, a perfect balance.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much for stopping by. I appreciate it. Lydi**

[Frieda P]

You had me at that first line Lydikey, in times of struggle we cling to our safe harbor, one that gives us sanctuary, alas it doesn't always last...an enthralling read!

the illogical seemed somehow logical

Sigh if that could only last forever and ever...

[Lydia Shutter]

Yes, if only.....but it seems some things are not meant to be. Thanks for the review, Frieda. Lydi**

[Sheila Kline]

It is unfortunate that life and love can be so wonderful and then one must leave - not a choice, but a "have to go" as in this case. The relationship too often suffers and the distance places strain on one to have the same feelings as when together. Your words bring back many memories of times past. I was fortunate not to have one go away to war but I know many who did and changes did happen. Yes, "Eve of Destruction" broke far too many hearts!
Very touching Lydi!! The memories of the good times stay with you, but they came at far too great a price!

[Lydia Shutter]

I am glad you could identify with the time I spoke of. I thought we were about the same age. Thank you for your worthwhile words, Sheila. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i had a different kind of relationship to this...but it was long distance with a woman from Poland...
and eventually, as chemically and emotionally explosive as it was, the distance wore us down...and eventually we suffered the Eve of Destruction of us.
this poem is fantastic, and so moving...i relate on many levels and love that song---

"hate your next door neighbor but don't forget to say grace"

i was 1A for awhile...but got lucky...didn't go.

thanks for the poem.
jacob

[Lydia Shutter]

It seems you and I have lived through a lot of the same times...and situations....thank you for telling me how you identify with my words. Yes, you were fortunate you did not have to go....very fortunate. Even friends who came home were never the same. I appreciate your review very much, Jacob. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i had several friends who went, and as you say...they came home "different"!

[Lydia Shutter]

And unfortunately they were never taken care of by the V.A.

[escherflight]

Oh, what a poignant final stanza; concise and precise. A powerful poem.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, escher. I appreciate your review. Lydi**