until our forever

"lily" by daniela mar

you pull me back towards myself
with your special brand of gravity
you surround me with your loving logic
then pour me into your arms
just one more time
one for the road as it were
a steady slow rain of emotion falls
desire blossoms
in this half dream - half reality moment

mon amour
perhaps it has all been said before
but i must tell you once more
with feeling
when the sun embraces the sea
when the moon kisses the stars
               until our forever
i love you

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and sweet words for love.
"when the sun embraces the sea
when the moon kisses the stars
until our forever
i love you"
The music of love never leaved us. Thank you Lydia for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Lydia Shutter]

Your reviews touch me, John. Thank you so much. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Lydia.

[Troy Henson]

You love with a strong heart Lydi. So much to take from this piece. Love is grand!

[Lydia Shutter]

It is indeed, Troy. Thank you for the review. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Lydi, You write romantic poetry like no one else...
when the sun embraces the sea
when the moon kisses the stars
until our forever
i love you
Breathtaking words my dear friend.
Hugs, Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

Julie, I feel the same way about your romantic poetry! Thank you so much. Lydi**

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Glad to read your stunning lines about the love....until its love, we would be forever!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks for the review. Lydi**

[emmajoy]

You so obviously love with great passion and delicacy... your words are always finely said and beautifully laid. This made me sigh. Happily.

[Lydia Shutter]

When a romantic poem elicits a sigh, I am thrilled. Thanks, Emma. Lydi**

[Trace]

I can just imagine you lying together with your lover,
with you reading your poetry to him,
and he,,, feeling like the luckiest man in the world

Very sweet declaration of love.

Trace

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Trace. Lydi**

[~]

The lover thirsty for you, holding you tight and filling you up with love that overflows through the most magnificent phrase anyone could ever hear being uttered from the lips of the one they adore.
A tender and beautiful write that sparkles with each star kissed line.
xo

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Moon. Enjoy the weekend. Lydi**

[~]

You too dear friend!! :D

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks, Moon!

[Desert Knave]

"just one more time / one for the road as it were". It seems your cup always is filled to overflowing and you celebrate it in poetry so beautifully. Until your forever indeed. ~Jim

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Jim. Always happy to see your reviews. Have a great weekend. Lydi**

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A lilting, breezy declaration of love as she dances on a moonbeam, cloud nine having elevated her to a place of contentment. Romance lives!

[Lydia Shutter]

Long may it do so! Thank you, John. Lydi*

[Barrett]

I agree with Jacob, "pour me into your arms" is such a perfect phrase...I'll have that line stuck in my head for a long time!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, Barrett. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a beautiful profession of love...the feel of your words lingers long after the read...and "pour me into your arms" is such a great line...i wish i had written that one, my friend.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks very much, Jacob. Lydi**