my skin remembers

it's friday night!

graphic courtesy of pinterest

my skin remembers

the electrified intimacy

soft as velvet yet wielding an unrivaled intensity

yesterday was blurry

tomorrow was a naked page

and that day, well, that day was a flower blooming

a peach ripening to its juicy best

yes, my skin remembers

it’s true…. from this standpoint of long ago

and so very far away

                even behind my foster grants

the memory continues to electrify

 

Reviews

[The dark story]

Woah! If feelings are ravishing and passionate, words bring them out alive and prime, and as refreshing as they ever were.
"yesterday was blurry
tomorrow was a naked page"
"that day was a flower blooming
a peach ripening to its juicy best"
These lines are my favourite- so passionate and vibrant. Loved it. A lovely poem. It's a pleasure to read it Keep writing :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Atiba. lydi**

[Miss Sharon]

Ahhh yes...this is my dear friend Lydi at her best! I love the way you write. ~Sharon

[Lydia Shutter]

You are such a sweetie. Thanks, Sharon. Sorry this thank you is so late. I was out of town. Lydi**

[barleygirl]

I know it's what I say about all your writing, but I love this one. The title is very catchy & memorable, sticking in the front of my mind as I read the rest . . . all these sensory details nicely supporting your initial premise. Love the phrase: "electrified intimacy" . . . & of course there is nothing more sensual than eating a ripe peach that drips sweetness all over everything.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Margie. I was away for a week. Sorry this thank you took so long. Lydi**

[emmajoy]

Lydi, come Winter you're going to save me so much cash on heating bills! When i need warmth, when i need feel the power of whatever it is you provide.. (and oh yes, innocent lil me doesn't understand).. will share the heat emanating from your poetry and just lie back, dreaming... fanning myself with a Thesaurus. Delightfully put, tasteful, elegant...excuse me, must go open a window.. :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Giggling here....Emma, you are a pip! Thanks so much. Lydi**

[emmajoy]

You're more than welcome.... :)

[Tom]

The mood and muse are so intensely passionate that they fervently combine to melt away the stresses and strains of the working week to edifying effect!

A delightful read Lydia that would surely satiate the libido of even the most disconnected and disconcerted of wandering souls !

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Tom. Lydi**

[Ken Simm.]

I would I think it hard to find anyone who does romance as well as you Lydi. I can think of few. This is no exception.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Ken. Lydi**

[redzone]

that must have been a really really really electrified moment Lydi.. so are the Forster Grants to hide the blush you are still feeling and still on display.. ;0) but that was yesterday, it's those peach ripened tomorrow's naked page I would anticipate with electrified skin... oh yeah... intimacy at its sensual best Lydi and your words make my skin tingle... thank you, it's Forster Grant "nice", Lydi....

redzone

[Lydia Shutter]

But of course I am blushing....you know I am an innocent! LOL Thanks so much for the "nice" review, my friend. Lydi**

[Desert Knave]

I like everything about this including the font and the Foster Grants. Kudos. ~Jim

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Jim. Always pleased to see you on my page. Lydi**

[Paul Bell]

Romance and memories rolled into one.
But more importantly. Foster Grants.
That's a blast from the past.

[Lydia Shutter]

Hey, I am THAT old!! LOL Thanks, Paul. Lydi**

[Tim]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. :)

[Lydia Shutter]

:) Thanks so much. Lydi**