mouthwatering moments

artwork by andrew atroshenko

delicate and dainty

the minutes we spend together

are like porcelain plates

setting the table for an elegant meal

in these mouthwatering moments

adjectives refuse to define my emotions

adverbs roam and participles are free to dangle

linguistic categories have blurry lines

conjunctions fill gaps no human would dare

interjections overflow with love

these tiny threads of time have woven themselves

into an ever changing tapestry

growing more exquisite each time we meet

that’s why even in the alone of my time

you are right here beside me

toujours et toujours

 

Reviews

[barleygirl]

The title is a beckoning bit of nice alliteration, followed by the same, again in the first line. This feels like your always-well-done wordplay pieces, as you dance around, weaving writing concepts with alluring sensory imaginings. I just noticed you also weave tapestries here *smile* I love the ending sentiments about always being there even during alone time.

[Lydia Shutter]

thank you very much, Margie. Lydi**

[Tom]

Special moments a worth a century of years and infuse the self with vitality!

A fine poetic enthuse, beautifully crafted!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, Tom. Lydi**

[Cassie]

This is the kind of write that will take some one up to cloud nine and that person wont wish to get out of that cloud. Always exquisite

[Lydia Shutter]

May you float on Cloud 9 for days! :) Thank you, Cassie. Lydi**

[Enchanted-Raven]

Beautiful words.....enjoyed :) x

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much. Lydi**

[Einstein Noodle]

we do all we can to wring from words every drop of life ...and immediately see them as fresh and new as that snow storm in Kansas ;) i think your poem is like a snowflake ..delicate; but the geometry as in that snowflake holds strong through out as metaphor ...as the English language is brutalized by instagram and all that stuff ..i appreciate your bringing all those subtleties to bear ... simply lovely .. romantic to beat hell ..and a fine touch in your French closing ... sighhhhhhhhhhhh! ;)
E.

[Lydia Shutter]

E, when I read your words, I think, "Maybe he read someone else's poem!" You flatter me so. I am disgusted at the way the electronic age has butchered the English language....but I really was not thinking of that at all when I wrote this one. Thank you so much for your lovely review. Sorry my thanks were delayed. I was on an incredible vacation. Lydi**

[Einstein Noodle]

well ........ so glad you had a vacation adventure ..they are precious ...

[Lydia Shutter]

Absolutely....and necessary if you ask me! :)

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Lydi, there is an elegance to being with someone who appreciates the finer delicacies of life... When Roger calls me "Rabbit", I assume he is thinking about Alice in Wonderland and the Tea Party with the Rabbit! Absolutely divine poetry. truly, Pat

[Lydia Shutter]

"Rabbit"...how cute! thank you for the review, my friend. Lydi**

[Ana Papaya]

:) beautiful words filled with expressions of love.
Your romantic heart never stops shining.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Ana. Lydi**

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

that’s why even in the alone of my time
you are right here beside me

So true love is never lost in life it toujours et toujours Vous maintient vivant et jeune pour toujours

[Lydia Shutter]

Merci, mon ami. Indeed, it keeps us alive and young forever. Lydi**

[writ rajat]

You remind me of my moments

[Lydia Shutter]

Glad to read that. Thank you for the visit. Lydi*

[Sonakshi Arora]

Wow I absolutely loved the comparisons! Good job :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, Sonakshi. Lydi*