He said she spoke in poetry

He said she spoke in poetry

A Poem by Lyric
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People can be described in many ways

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He said she speaks in poetry,
Her eyes spoke to him glowingly,

Her face as beautiful as a song,

Her hair a pianist, dark and long,
He said she spoke on poetry

© 2015 Lyric


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Lovely, as always :) beautiful flow, elicits feeling, great job

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lyrical as your name states, it is witty and flows smoothly, five lines almost a limerick in nature. A fun read, thank you for posting so we could all enjoy your work :~)

Posted 5 Years Ago


last line - on or in?

I smiled as I reached the end because I've seen people that way myself.


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lyric

5 Years Ago

Oh, in, it's a typo
Chris

5 Years Ago

thought it might be...
Bear

5 Years Ago

I think it is right as you have it, "speaks in poetry" present tense and "spoke on poetry" past tens.. read more

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Added on June 19, 2015
Last Updated on June 19, 2015
Tags: girl, boy, love, music, beauty, metaphor

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Lyric
Lyric

Newark, NJ



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Hi, I love to write and I'd just really like some feed back on all of my stuff, and I love to read other poets'/writers' work more..

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A Poem by Lyric