"Entranced"

"Entranced"

 

Maybe as the darkness is broken,

By the golden rays of sunlight,

I'll forget it all.

 

Seldom of the hurt to trance,

Spun so golden by the sun,

Forget what has happened.

 

The crying part,

That hurtful tinge,

The yelling stop,

Shredding the hurt,

For a New Layer.

 

Breaking the steady rythum,

Starting over again,

Maybe I'll fufill,

Finally?

 

Yesterday I dodged it,

The day before,

Stinging into the Shadows,

And not a single glance.

 

And now that "New Day" Is done.

 

So maybe today I'll forget it all,

Turn over a blank page,

And as the sun rolls up,

The darkness splitting away,

To wait for a new day.

 

And as that day bids through,

I'll wait,

Tugging the pain away,

Only to fall asleep in sheer vain.

 

Maybe as the darkness is broken,

By yet another day,

By the rays of sunlight,

Forget my past today....

 

- Bliss. <33

 

 

 

Reviews

[Ellen Mary]

captivating
what a way to express the human condition
ggreat read

[melancholia skies]

Great job my bebe!

[Life Inside Death]

Our constant search for forgiveness...
But maybe if we didnt do these sinful things in the first place then our lives would be so much simpler..without the need to find atonement..
good job mere

[Jason]

This was an excellent poem. I like the colored font. I always use the sun as a 'cyclical' metephor, it seems to present the idea that we revolve and evolve. Great job young lady.

[dread or dismay.]

Note: Well, This poem was about someone who had bad things, shall I phrase, In their past, And only willingly wants to forget Them.

[The Autumn Faerie]

The past is something that must not be forgotten, but embraced, for it allows us to learn from our mistakes as well as the misdeeds of others.

By the way, I love the highlights in reference to the sun; they add a nice emphasis to the words.