many days

many days

A Poem by de_maruf
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hmm many days

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it's been many days
i don't write.
it's been many days
i don't sleep.
it's been many days
i really don't sleep.
it's been many days
you are far from me.
it's been many days
you are not mine.
it's been many days
it's been many days

© 2013 de_maruf


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de_maruf
it's been many days
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Many days... yes, sometimes the ideas do not wish to be written down. They just float about in our minds and refuse to congregate into anything worthy of sharing. Who knows the reasons? They are many, no doubt and unique to each person. Failure to sleep is a different problem but again with potentially many reasons. This poems certainly points out those facts in a succinct but rather choppy and terse fashion. I doubt it will thrill most English readers but I could be wrong (probably am). However it does communicate clearly and that's probably its most redeeming feature. Keep at it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


The emotion of loss comes through clearly. I enjoyed it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


well done and personable

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nice job

Posted 7 Years Ago



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de_maruf

dhaka, south, Bangladesh



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i want to cut my life as my desired time and want to make my time eventful and........................................................................................................................... more..

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