Drifting Our Souls

I make love to you
in the clouds cherries jubilee

my blandishment glide
parts your calming seas

the night applauds
our propinquity hearts 

grants us the light
inspissating the dawn

as we promulgate,
erupt shivers into the sky

in our arms
the organon universe expands 

pouring easy
as sunday morning 

a babbling brook
in natural hot springs

cuts a winding valley
drifting our souls

Reviews

[Saoirse K.]

this is really cool
i love the way you've connected
the interpersonal and intimate
to the grandeur of the universe
the relatively minute interaction
of two people making love
shaping and being shaped by
the world itself
i really loved that imagery
good write

[Matthew]

Thank You, so deeply for such a lovely review

[Saoirse K.]

my pleasure

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words. Tender, kind and wonderful flow of thoughts. Allowed the reader to feel the emotions. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Matthew]

Thank You, for the lovely accolades

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Matthew.