For just the dance...

For just the dance...

A Poem by Magdelena

She moves
Eyes closed
Heart beating so
Oh the joy!

Her passion takes over
For within its a living thing
Devouring all
Nothing else of importance.

Just the dance..

She twirls round and round
Arms spread wide
Leaping through the air
She is flying.

The music taking her to the point of no return
To dreams of yester-year
Days of wonder and joy
She glides softly.

Like a breeze softly moving
She passes all around
Her eyes seeing only the light
Hearing the music take her beyond.

In motion, she is...


For just the dance...


Always... For just the dance..

 

 

Photo Courtesy (c) of Tinypic

© 2009 Magdelena


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nice...one must delve into the very character...the idea...the very ...emotion of their desire to feel the essence of its emotion...nice work Mags....

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a true dancer's piece reminds me of Norma Sherer in the "Red Shoes" a woman who gives up all for the love of the dance and dies while dancing. A great movie, a greater poem because it brought back the memory of such a wonderful moving picture Kudos my Twin

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

OH HOW THE DANCE TAKES US FROM EARTH AND DEPOSITS US IN HEAVEN!
TATE

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the flow and movement of this piece I could feel her passion for the dance your words held all of the love and passion for the dance, the music and the demanding hours of practice. Well done my friend
Hugs Debby

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can feel a sense of like music playing with this, and since I understand that more than dance, I can relate.
The way that music moves a dancer, this piece moved me.
The flow is beautiful and lyrical.
Thanks for this great piece.
Keep it up.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really liked it. It really gives you a good picture of whats happening.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I find this hard to relate to as i have no rhythm lol, but I did enjoy this piece, I like the way its portrayed romanticly.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Magdelena
Magdelena

Charlotte, NC



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