Two hearts

Two hearts

A Poem by Magdelena

 
 
 How far will our love go,
Till we realize it has left?
How much pain will we withstand,;
Till we finally let go of the regrets?
 
Do we keep on playing the game?
Acting the fool?
Telling ourselves,
That this is what we must do?
 
I watch as you look at her
Your heart on your sleeve
Your eyes always following her
When you think I don't see.
 
I sit and just stare
No words do I say
For nothing is left
Now just another day.
 
Oh what we once had...
 
Such a love that was adored
Two people madly in love
Nothing in our way
Yet now look at us.
 
For there is nothing this day..
 
Except lies and deceit
Photos from the past
Old and faded
Burning down fast.
 
Scorched till all that remains
Is the dust from days gone by
I look upon them now
And all I can do is cry.
 
Two hearts we once shared
That all that stood was one
And now when I see us
All that's left is now done.
 
 
So tell me my love,
Please if you will...
 
 
How far will our love go,
Till we realize it has left?
How much pain will we withstand,
Till we finally let go of the regrets?
 

© 2009 Magdelena


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Yes How far does one go? I wish I knew . This is a questioning poem one to which one must say this is far enough I will take no more! but how far is far?

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A poem of love betrayed...well written and expressed...nice job on this

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very sensetive and mentally destructive piece. The pain true love causes on one end, or possibly botoh the struggling feelings locking inside this poem. I love it , pure emoitonal stuff

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Magdelena
Magdelena

Charlotte, NC



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