And petals of color slowly drifts by with the breeze...

Nature at its best. Nothing more serene.

Petals falling beneath my feet

Of soft velvety color

My fingers gently take one

Fingers tracing the soft lines

Exquisite images pass before my mind

Clouds rumble throughout the sky

I look up, and see the darkness

As it slowly moves across the vastness

All is still, the air, wind, sound.. All silent

Then.. Brilliant color flashes before me

A soft wind slowly forms and passes by

Gently, I let my fingers open..

 

And petals of color slowly drifts by with the breeze...  

  

Reviews

[JcBrown]

its been a long time since i have been on here! I really enjoyed this.

[OT]

very nice!!! strong imagery - I felt like I was there haha - very well written and a great layout! nice as always!!!

[Eric Cox]

Very beautiful. Lovely imagery penned. Excellent pen upon this poem.

[Kat24]

Hi,
this is really good. i liked how you wrote this. kat24

[Coyote Poetry]

A very beautiful poem. I like the description. Our eyes can see beauty when we desire. I like the complete poem. A perfect ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Robert]

this is a very lovely piece, i love the way that it moves through out the poem. it works very well with your obviously well picked word choice and structure. the moment is written very beauitful and you have really done a very good job here.

[KalebG (Cry Faux)]

I can see a real picture here, the senses of all, calms my mind when i read this piece i love this.

[Fran Marie]

you paint a beautiful picture of sweet tranqulity~ sooo nicely penned

[R J Askew]

O to have such visions! You have an exquisite touch. I like the way perception shift-shapes in such a beguiling way.

[Tate Morgan]

I see in you a growth that i like