And oh so softly

Love makes the heart beat faster..

His passion makes her swoon in a liquid pool at his feet
His touch... Oh to feel it brings the earth crashing down
Lightning darts throughout her body coursing through veins.

The voice of an angel speaks softly in her ear

And she sighs...

 

Heart beats rapidly..

Breath steams the very mirror of her soul

Soft whispers she grasps

With shaking fingertips

Touching them to her lips

Of parted wonder.

 

Colors swirl around her

Capturing her senses

Making them scream for mercy

And he gently smiles

Brilliant as the morning sun,

She basks in his glory

Holding close all he is.

 

Then slowly she slips away 

Letting his touch move her

His arms soft,

Yet with strength like none other

Taking her towards heaven

Then spiraling quickly

Towards hell

And she sighs.

 

Lips of passion spent now kiss

Softly, into the darkness of night

Sharing each others souls

Dreams

Love...

 

And oh so softly...

 

They sigh..

 ~~~~

His passion makes her swoon in a liquid pool at his feet

 

 

Reviews

[Cynthia]

A passionate write! I love the softness of your poem, and the words are so light and soft it seems to be whispering into my ears! How beautifully written it is! The whole atmosphere you created its so relaxing, I love reading your poem, makes me so relax , leaning at on the back of my chair, with a smile on my face :) In some way, its exciting as well...
Lovely!

[Ladysue]

What a beautiful description...very passionate...absolutely love these lines...

Then slowly she slips away
Letting his touch move her
His arms soft,
Yet with strength like none other
Taking her towards heaven

and the last verse is wonderful too...a pleasure to read...

[MuSe Ampoule]

Very, very passionate! *applauds* you sure do know how to turn up the heat!!!

[TamiViolet]

Within you is fire. I wonder if that's your element? What I really like about your pieces is that you create a pulse-like quality through lust and gentle passion....these unite and climax....Hard, soft, hard, soft....lub, dub, lub, dub....faster....faster....then...slowly the lovers fall into a blissful state of gratification... And now, I sigh... so exciting to feel the way you describe, Mags....

[Patches I'm not so new..]

By the Eternal Maggie what is it that you have say or do? A prayer, a ritual a dance? You always come up with new ways to sing songs of the power of love, romance and passion your writes and the freshness you instill into them constantly amaze me a genius you are!