Take Me

Bring me home to God in Heaven,
To where eternal resting lies--
Above the world, no longer broken,
Sleeping safely in the skies.

So now in this chanting sorrow,
In these tears which I abide,
Nevermore shall be tomorrow,
With the aid of suicide.

Grant me now a courage waiting
To stay and live upon this earth.
But what now is the point of living,
If I've not here since my birth?

Author's Note

Haven't posted a poem in a while... I hope you enjoyed!

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a great write. It was powerful. And I loved the flow. You did such a great job. Thank you for sharing. :D

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you for reading!! ^_^

[Angie Diane♥♥]

You're welcome. :)

[Honeycomb]

I love it! This was AWESOME!

[InsanityWriter]

Thanks. (:

[Sam Gregory]

Wow, this flows very smoothly, very. I like this a lot, the message is good too :) Keep it up!

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you for reading! ^_^ I really appreciate it. (:

[Sam Gregory]

No problem :)

[Matthew Kult]

Hello Insanity,

Darkly deep with a pinch of ideation

Always,

Matthew
A.

[InsanityWriter]

Thanks for reading. :) I'm glad you enjoyed. ^_^

[Matthew Kult]

Welcome

[Clove]

Wow, this seems sad but. Did you ever have suicidal feelings? It's just a curious question. I mean, it is about death or life isn't it? I'm curious because I had those feelings when i was younger, around 10th grade, when I was being bullied by students a my school. well high school however. No offense or anything, i'm just curious.

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you for reading, and I have. :)

[Hazel Stone]

really good thanks for sharing :D

[InsanityWriter]

And thanks for reading. ;) Happy you liked it!!

[Michael of Gilead]

I appreciate the form, the talent...keep writing.

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you. :)

[Balkaran Sidhu]

strange sense of hope nd hopelessness at the same time....nice one

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you for reading. I'm happy you liked it. (:

[PoetessZero]

i like it. i would like to see one more stanza. you have very graceful word play and i hear it as i read it in soft voice of conviction. your talented. and im amazed at your ability to capture raw emotion at such a young age. keep writing

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you for your kind words. :) I definately shall. ^_^

[Nick.B]

Great writing, I can see the imaginary that you've just painted...well done

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you for reading. :) I really appreciate it. ^_^