SEDUCTIVE DAWN

A Tanka poem...5 lines...5,7,5,7,7, syllables

Dawn rose from slumber
seductively unrobing
to music of morn’

Her veils of many colours
now lie strewn across the sea

Maggie © 2013

Reviews

[s y e]

Wow, this is beyond perfect, Magnolia. I thoroughly enjoyed this one and cannot even begin to tell you how enjoyable it is.

[Magnolia]

thanks again..it was a pleasure to write

[Magnolia]

thanks Stella...I loved writing this..not been here for a while !

[Stella Armour]

it takes a while to get back into it, but your poetry is so stunning i am sure people will want to follow you again...

[Stella Armour]

reading this again Maggie, simply because it i so lovely......

[Jack...]

Oh my, this was stunning. I can not even begin to tell you how much I enjoyed this. 5 lines of perfect beauty and charm. Very nicely done Maggie.

[Magnolia]

thanks so much Jack , so glad you enjoyed it. I have entered it into the Tanka contest :)

[Jack...]

Well then let me wish you good luck, though I'm sure you won't need it.

[Magnolia]

thank you :)

[SyberRose]

Beautiful images Maggie...skillfully penned as always...Rose:)

[Magnolia]

Thanks Rose, your comments always are so welcome...Maggie

[Stella Armour]

a beautiful image here my friend.. i can see here shedding her coloured veils over the ocean...
a gorgeous tanka..i love this form

[Magnolia]

thanks for reading Stella...:))

[Stella Armour]

you are most welcome Maggie , it is my pleasure...x