Stupid Cupid

Cover your bottom it's bare
It's not arrows that fall from the air
You are only a babe with a bow
It's not love you make people show
Instead you cause great confusion
even causing lust and delusion
I linger among those you've hit
Their not covered with love but with sh**
I'll hide in the shadows this year
I'll catch you if you wander near
There's no place for narcissistic pricks
Flying round me with sharp pointy sticks!

Author's Note

Not my typical way to write but I wanted to try something a tad different for the little contest, lol.

Reviews

[Undying Glory]

yep this was very nice work, and this sure made me smile. this one was a darn cool take on what we all see Cupid as, i sure loved this. i think you could make this even more hilarious as in some works of art Cupid is shown blindfolded as a testimony to that saying "love is blind". and i must agree, those last two lines were awesome. nice work!

[Nina Kari]

ha! ok that was good! i really liked that!

[Stacey Watts]

This was awesome. It made me giggle and I have so been there. I really enjoyed reading this.

[Marie Harrison]

Ha! Very clever indeed! The last two lines were the best. Thanks for making me laugh!

[Amanda Dawn Sanderson-G..]

Ha! I love it; take the decieving b*****d down!

[Jenny Nelson]

I like it! Fun, clever, hard hitting and makes a definite point of the difference between love and lust.

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

This is brilliant! Made me laugh~

[Ashley Myers]

hahahahaha i LOVE this lol. made me laugh. and im still smiling!!! so true!!! Cupid can't pull the wool over our eyes haha

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Wow. This was flaming work...
Hot emotion and it put a smile on my face.