Mi Amore' No More

Fog, silence and freedom
I walk the emerald mile
The folded note beneath you
gives birth to my smile
I roll what's left behind me
few materials shall I need
Your desires for the others
quenched your thirst and greed
Take what I leave behind
burn to ashes if you must
My misery and anguish
are metal left to rust
These steps are my voice
you always did ignore
No longer will your insolence
abuse your Mi Amore'

Author's Note

One of my more liberating choices in life!

Reviews

[Jibey]

This poem explains a lot and speaks of a woman who walks away from an unfathful lover...and who has asserted herself at last in taking the steps that lead her away...

The writing flows strongly and confidently and the rhym is unobtrusive but like a glue to hold the words together...

[Yina]

Wow I love the way this is written! Your wording is great!

[Ruth]

And there comes a point where we have to recollect and design a future for ourselves, we owe it to ourselves! Poignant write love xx

[Dilan Gray]

This poem really hits you over the head with powerful emotions and images, it is great! Your word choice was beautiful and the poem had a nice flow to it. I especially loved the last two lines. Fantastic poem.

[northern monkey]

Beautiful expression of difficult emotions. Great life spirit.

[reminder]

I love the power in the decision! Flows very nicely with brilliant word choice~ Well done!

[Poetic Beauty]

I love this poem. Standing up and walking away refusing to let someone belittle you anymore. This shows freedom and strength and the flow is smooth.

[Calypso]

Well written. I loved who the title rhymed.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. Sometime we must insure the goodbye is underdtood. I like the flow of words and title. A very good ending to a outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[OT]

strong words - break the chains indeed - get freedom! liberation!! nice!