My love

My love

is rare...

My love

is true...

But only if it's for you...

 

Don't mess with my heart,

if you do,

I'll tear you apart...

Even if I don't have to..

 

If you come into my life,

beware!

My love is very delicate,

crush it, you'll get an ever lasting depth..

 

Hate me,

and you won't see

the light of day,

because I will take the sun away..

 

Like the ocean needs the moon to take the tides away,

all we need is a little time to chase the blues away..

 

Don't you dare tell me that...

Because I know all you want

is me

being in your life...

 

Hurt me,

and you will suffer...

I have my big brother, Diego..

and my best friends Analia, Rebecca, Rosana, and Diana to kill you!!

Just to let you know...

Your cousin is on my side.

Isn't that right, Ricardo?

 

IF you anger my heart,

you will be struck by lightning..

or even Thunder..

You will go to the land down under!

 

Were you will plunder!!

I can't live with you!!

in my life...

so just die...

I never want to see your beautiful smile again

 

 

Reviews

[rafi]

[Mariana,you are a strong and beautiful girl]

A poem may be personal something to love,
not to hide in a leather glove
hold this poem near your heart,
because with it can u begin a whole new start
Mariana,love is like a rubber band,
it springs back and forth,i know your love will soon go north

excuse my poetry not very good i hope you like it nothing rhymes with forth hahaha

[BenightedWhispers]

Very emotionally well said. You might want to proofread your work though. I enjoyed it though.

[darkgurl]

Very well said and well put, like the rhyming very well written. A very talented and an emotional write here, enjoyed.

[Christopher Marlowe]

Better proofread or run spellcheck! Too many errors...
CM