I like you

I like you

A Poem by M

'
I like you
And I can’t seem to stop
I like you
And I know why
Your beauty
Your humour
Your laugh
Everything about you intrigues me
You draw me in
There is something about you
You get embarrassed when I ask
Questions you don’t want to answer
You go shy
I think it’s cute.
I like you
I shouldn’t
But I do.
I’m more into this than you
But that’s ok
If you're ok
then I’m ok
All I ask
And I won’t ask for much
Is that we will always be friends
Even if nothing else
Because that is something
I can promise
I will be here
In whatever way you need
'

© 2018 M


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This is such a good poem! Needs a couple edits though. Line five should be either "you're beautiful" or "your beauty." Line 10 from the bottom should be "you're" instead of "your."

Posted 3 Years Ago


M

3 Years Ago

Thankyou I really appreciate the feedback 😃 I will make those edits too 😊

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Added on October 28, 2017
Last Updated on January 11, 2018
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HULL, United Kingdom



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