A Guest Awaits

A Guest Awaits

A Poem by Marie
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If we want to have love in our life we must be willing to open the door of our heart...

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The door of your heart

Opens only from the inside

Outside love is waiting.

© 2024 Marie


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This brief offering describes the predicament of many. Having been hurt, or maybe just fearing hurt, they keep their emotions close to the vest. This may provide protection of a sort, but at the same time it keeps the affections of others at arms length. Loneliness and frustration are its fruits.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

1 Week Ago

Dear J. B. I so agree with your comment. Closing one's heart does provide a degree of protection, bu.. read more



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Gee
It amazes me that some folk never open their heart for anyone, how sad to miss out on true love.

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Marie

1 Week Ago

Yes, it surprises me too, Gee. I guess if one is hurt in a relationship they are careful ever after... read more
MMmmm, Marie! ⛩️

What's not to adore about this delightful little poetic warmer?
I really cannot answer that rhetorical question. ; )
Almost a perfect 5/7/5 Senryu that can be made such with barely a breath of the pen's caring touch.

the door of your heart
opens only from inside
outside love awaits (or) love awaits outside (or) love outside awaits

So many ways for a creative poetess to share that a hopeful romantic guest can enter the heart through an open door, but never through one that remains sealed from affection, or bravely taking a chance.
Love the perfect artwork choice and imagination-catching title.

I so warmly cherish how you wield your caressing pen✍ Dear Poetess.
Bless thee always, well and true! ⁓ Richard🖌


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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

1 Week Ago

Your poetic pen is very gifted, dear Richard. I cannot thank you enough for the amazing reviews you .. read more
Richard🖌

1 Week Ago

You inspire me.
Marie

1 Week Ago

Bless you!
This brief offering describes the predicament of many. Having been hurt, or maybe just fearing hurt, they keep their emotions close to the vest. This may provide protection of a sort, but at the same time it keeps the affections of others at arms length. Loneliness and frustration are its fruits.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

1 Week Ago

Dear J. B. I so agree with your comment. Closing one's heart does provide a degree of protection, bu.. read more
and if we lock ourselves in,
there is no light, no love, no life.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

1 Week Ago

I agree 100% with your thoughts, Jacob and thank you for kindly commenting. Have a blessed day...
Better not to keep our hearts locked.
I enjoyed reading this poem.
Very good.
Keep it up. Take good care.
😃

Posted 1 Week Ago


Marie

1 Week Ago

Thank you for kindly reading this little senryu, dear A.R. and for your encouraging comment. I agree.. read more
The_Ancient_Rock

1 Week Ago

You are most welcome.
Thank you so much.
Take good care Marie.
Blessed be!
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Marie

1 Week Ago

Thank you, A.R.
Blessed be...


Goes without saying .. couldn't have put it better myself .. Neville ❤️

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you so very much, Neville. So pleased you like this little micropoem! Have a very nice rest of.. read more
Neville

1 Week Ago


......... and write back at you ma'am :)
Marie

1 Week Ago

Thank you kind sir :-)
Perfectly stated and felt. If only the entire world would open their hearts and allow love in and out, what a great place this would be.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you for kindly taking time out to read and comment on my little poem, dear Willweb. I so agree.. read more

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Added on May 14, 2024
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Kerry, Ireland



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