A Poem by Marisa!(:

I saw apicture of two gohst holding eachother over a lake surounded by trees. This poem came out of that.(:


At this lake is where I first saw you,

You're reflection in the deep, deep blue.

I felt this deep connection yes,

That I had to have you not the rest.

I made you fall in love with me,

Yes it's a very greedy deed.

My obsession grew more and more,

But you're love for me so true and pure.

So at this lake its going to be,

Our souls are going to roam and flee.

I'll stab us both our blood will run,

But don't forget that I love you hun.

So now that it is set and done,

Our new beginning has just begun.

We curse this lake forever and ever,

You and me my darling trevor.

© 2009 Marisa!(:

Author's Note

(: I hope you like it.

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Dark and twisted love wrapped into fun rhyming poetry, a fun read despite the topic... I think of Motley Crue's song "You're All I Need"

Posted 14 Years Ago

To love so deeply that you commit the ultimate sin of murdering the one you love and commiting suicide in order to assure you will always be together. Not trusting that the feeling is strong enough to last in life, it is believed they will bind together through death. A dark and thought provoking poetic work. Just don't know if I would want someone to love me that much. Your flow and rhyme were very good. You wrote a visual picture of the picture you viewed. Enjoyed this work. Keep the poetic pen moving.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on September 10, 2009



Albuquerque, NM

There's not a whole lot to me. But right now Im trying to get situated to High School. Imvery complicated. Writing is one of my escapes, as well as listening to music. Please leave me feedback and rev.. more..

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A Poem by Marisa!(:

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