Flowers in spring

Once upon a time in califonia
In the middle of a forest i sat down near a Sequoia
Looking at the sunset feeling the breeze
I saw a light shine upon my eyes
through the trees
I remembered the times we wandered on these hills
As the years passed by
All of it just faded like the flowers in spring
Sometimes i wish all of this was just a dream
Until i saw someone walking
Towards me

Reviews

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This is very illusive and touching. It's feels like almost dream or imagined experience inside of your head. Certainly it have emotional impact on reader. Special that ending. When we wondering who is that person who come in close to you. It's just your own reflection or same stranger who share same nature like you ?

[Mark Amarasena]

It was a stranger who shares the nature like me that's why the walking towards me made abit of an impact. And thank you for this feedback I'll make sure to read some of your work.

[NC Overton]

Interesting juxtaposition of concrete images with ethereal overtones. Evokes an emotional longing for something long past...or is it? I enjoyed the read.

[Mark Amarasena]

Thank you very much for the feedback and I'm really happy you've enjoyed reading my poetry and I'll make sure to read some of your work.