Ace's

Ace's

A Poem by Honey-Bee
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A women born with the Ace's Beauty and talent

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She was born with the Ace's
And knew little of graces
And she played her cards well
She was born very pretty
And she was very very witty
And her heart was a shallow well
She played her cards on time
Yes, better than organized crime
And she was not willing to tell
That she held  Ace's
without any graces
And with all the powers of hell
She wiggled when she walked
And she giggled when she talked
And their time was up with a bell

© 2014 Honey-Bee


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I enjoyed the poem. Nice flow of thoughts.
"She wiggled when she walked
And she giggled when she talked
And their time was up with a bell"
A nice tale in the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Honey-Bee

9 Years Ago

Thanks Coyote Poetry!
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
interesting piece you have here. 40 years ago this would have made a killer rolling stones song! thankyou.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Honey-Bee

10 Years Ago

Thanks Streamline! I grew up with the Rolling stones too. Its possible I created this poem from som.. read more
This is a beautiful poem keep up the great work and keep sending me more to read i love reading them

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Honey-Bee

10 Years Ago

Thanks Melissa!
melissa

10 Years Ago

Your welcome
Love the description in this poem. :-) Nicely written.

Kaze~ :-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Honey-Bee

10 Years Ago

Thanks Kaze!
♔ CrownedDevil ☾

10 Years Ago

Your very welcome. :-D
There is a lot more to this piece than meets the eye, unlike the character of the poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Honey-Bee

10 Years Ago

Thanks KL Goode!

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Honey-Bee

Ventura , CA



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