Pain is like a whip
A Poem by
Mary Bosworth
Eyes don't fade impressions hiding , maybe. Left to the wind over and under wonders never cease to amaze the Heart the Mind No matter what inflammatory as I am ... still I leave imprints on your Heart... Hurt is the biggest part Pain is like a whip every-time I get strong I slip, like a knot. It can suffocate or invigorate Let me be... your knot come see how easily I can tie you into ...me~! Come on and ...see.
© 2014 Mary Bosworth
Reviews
Your pieces always have a unique flair and a cool creative style. Good job
Posted 9 Years Ago
I really like this piece and its sentiment too. Good writing
Posted 9 Years Ago
I really like this piece and its sentiment too. Good writing
Wow! This is a delightful read and a truly powerful journey. Well done indeed here
Posted 9 Years Ago
Wow! This is a delightful read and a truly powerful journey. Well done indeed here
This is so beautifully expressed and wonderfully written
Posted 9 Years Ago
This is so beautifully expressed and wonderfully written
...it is very much like a whip, never ceasing to remind us where it hurts the most.
Posted 9 Years Ago
...it is very much like a whip, never ceasing to remind us where it hurts the most.
This is cutting, relentless in the pain...wow.
Posted 9 Years Ago
This is cutting, relentless in the pain...wow.
Pain is like a whip
every-time I
get strong
I slip,
like a knot.
It can suffocate
or
invigorate
My favorite bit - great piece - made my mind spin.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Pain is like a whip
every-time I
get strong
I slip,
like a knot.
It can suffocate
or
invigorate
My favorite bit - great piece - made my mind spin.
This poems leaves a bit of a sting. Love the ending, for indeed live does bind two people together.
Posted 9 Years Ago
This poems leaves a bit of a sting. Love the ending, for indeed live does bind two people together.
Great attention to detail and vivid imagery help make this a wonderful poem. Well done
Posted 9 Years Ago
Great attention to detail and vivid imagery help make this a wonderful poem. Well done
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Added on August 31, 2014
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