Unknown Nature Abyss

Unknown Nature Abyss

A Poem by Maskedthoughts

Glistening meadows and roaring seas,
A patch of trees swaying in the breeze.
The scent of pine crisp in the air.
An invigorating universe full of intrigue.

An escape so tempting it calls to me,
With trembling fingers and shaking legs;
A ragged breath escaping my cage.

I pursue the unknown nature abyss,
trapped in a dome that ceases to exist.
I can't resist the pull towards an escape.

A chance to breathe,
A chance to relieve:
The fear: the anger.
It's all a danger.

© 2014 Maskedthoughts


Author's Note

Maskedthoughts
I have mixed feelings about this poem. Maybe it just doesn't seem finished to me...
Feedback please?

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wonderful :) everyone likes to be out of that cage and if you wrote this one I'm sure you are about to find a escape ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Maskedthoughts

10 Years Ago

Thank you !

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Added on May 16, 2014
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Tags: nature, dark, teen, poetry, escape, longing, trapped, imagery

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