My love is a whisper

I dont really care that it doesnt rhyme. Amy I love you... as always that is a whisper compared to the truth.

My love is a whisper

Of what I really feel

My love is a whisper

Of what I really say

My love is a whisper

When I hold you with one arm

My love is a whisper

When I hold you with two

My love is a whisper

When I kiss you on your head

My love is a whisper

When I kiss you on your lips

My love is a whisper

That the whole world hears

My love is a whisper

Reviews

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Matthew,

Yes, I know. Quiet, yet so deep and sincere. It is not quiet for any reason other than it is private. It is not quiet because it is ashamed. Just ask. You'll not hold back, but give full report of your love. It is a whisper, yet behind it is the power of a roar. Your love is a whisper of what you truly feel.

I understand.

Wonderful poem.

Best regards,

Rick

[Nae Nae]

This is beautiful Matthew. It's kinda short but it really speaks to anyone with ears. I think you should defenitely continue with this type of work, it is very beautiful.

Nae-Nae ...

[indieRokker]

The constant repitition of this was an entriguing depth of Love's constant whispers.
You portrayed this in a delicate way.
Amazing Job :)
indie

[Amy]

this is amazing matt and says what you feel well i love it (and u)

[D J K March]

Brilliant!

[deeps]

This is so beuatiful and so touching.
A most loving write you have penned.
Wonderful write.

[*Evelen*]

This is such a sweet poem! Very good job! Thanks for sharing! =)