Give me Villians!!!!!

Give me Villians!!!!!

A Story by Matty Bosox
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Alright guys....For those of you who have been fans of The Beginning of Hope...

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This is for those of you who have been fans of my suprising story of Rain Hope Barnaby...The Beginning of Hope....I need some really good ideas for villians to aid Tomb and Jenni Hastings in the destruction of Hope....If you have good ideas anything at all as long as its nothing goofy or silly, I would love a name, a type of power or talent, they can be any type of character except for vampires, zombies, or werewolves  LoL  They could be some secret military experiment, something satanic, somebody that is enhanced with some kind of chemical...Anything you can think of.....The most wicked names and character descriptions will be used in my story...Maybe some as even unlikely allies....Just give me some of your best ideas if you can....Thanks alot guys!!!  You have been the catalyst to me wanting to keep going with this story with a smile because of the great and informative reviews you have given.....Thank you all sooo much I appreciate it!!!

© 2012 Matty Bosox


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Matty Bosox
In your review just give me cool names, character descriptions, anything you guys can think of

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The wicked Jaffar the minister of conspiracy and plots in Alladin... How about that ...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Matty Bosox

11 Years Ago

Jaffar was a classic villain LoL I was always more prone to the Queen of Hearts :o)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

Smiling...
You guys have all given me excellent names and ideas I love it!!! I am sooo sorry I haven;t been on here in like three months it upset me soo much....But now I have my internet back!!! So be prepared for more great reviews from me and I'm sorry to say the story of Rain Hope Barnaby has to go on the back burner for now....I have to concentrate on my Gaurdian Angel Project...

Posted 11 Years Ago


I am super excited for this!!! :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Pax
i havent read your stories, but i can give you some advice:
a power hungry being. the one who steals power from you leaving you powerless and then kill you. about the name i dont know i kinda have problems with naming my characters.
hope it helps.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Matty Bosox

11 Years Ago

I like the concept of course and who doesn't...Thats the only problem...Its been done many times whe.. read more
Pax

11 Years Ago

I always admire that concept and now that i think about this its kinda common... I have this idea in.. read more
I don't know about the name, but a scientist is very classic... Which your story is not... What I try to do is surpirse people, so, turn a classic into something new. Try a women scientist, or a golem one... Or maybe your scientist has bright green hair because of an experiment... Just little things that will change your entire story

Posted 11 Years Ago


emilythestrange

11 Years Ago

Oh, and I came up with a name... " Doctor Frances Daniel" for a guy, and Dr. Mattie Martinez
Matty Bosox

11 Years Ago

Very good ideas I think I may actually throw in with this Dr Frances Daniel Very good stuff
emilythestrange

11 Years Ago

;)
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TLK
"The Ellipsis". That's a cool villain name.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Matty Bosox

11 Years Ago

Love the name!!! Kinda has the sound of a name for a Honda though..But it is very good...Very origi.. read more
You can write about a psycho scientist, who is just a genius. And creates such drugs to destroy selected woman in different ways. May be because he got deceived by his wife, whom he loved more than himself, and her separation from him made him to suffer a serious kind of brain disorder. Also, you can name him, Dr. Hradawk Miller.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Matty Bosox

11 Years Ago

No thats fine....I will still use it...The name is great and thats the hardest part of creating a vi.. read more
green dreams

11 Years Ago

if u want fiction, then may be the character can invent a little thing, which can control the flow o.. read more
TLK

11 Years Ago

Tidal power is both destructive and a good source of energy. Everybody needs energy to power their .. read more

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Matty Bosox
Matty Bosox

Wyoming, PA



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My name is Matt, I live in eastern Pennsylvania....I have been working on the same writing project for the past ten years....Everybody loves it...I have also been trying to get it out there to the pub.. more..

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