Lifeless Cube

The Sunlight passes through the tube,

 Making a glowing sphere on my wall.

I sit in the corner,

Inside this lifeless cube

Ink flows through steel nib,

On the blank papers

My thoughts crawl…

Reviews

[Gurdeep...The Lost]

A short poem having a deep insight I must say. I do feel like this sometimes, sitting in the corner, seeing the light pass by , but not bothering to enlighten ( cheer up , here) me. Any ways, good one.

[Mayank]

Sometime we need to be silent, that we find in the darkness.

[Avinash]

We are there with you through every word of this small poem. You are a very promising writer.
Know yourself better and give us more of such writing. I liked the font style as well.

[Mayank]

Thank you so much!

[Eve Ola]

very creatively you penned this piece. I really enjoyed :)

[Mayank]

thanks you Eve

[Ruth]

The glow with the loneliness here is a wonderful and powerful combination, very visual, I felt the emotion here x

[Mayank]

Thanks Poppy!

[Frieda P]

The loneliness is palpable on your page Mayank, alas we always have poetry, wasn't sure about the 'tube', were you referring to the tv or your insight?

[Mayank]

Tube is insight. Thank you Frieda!