Shredding Skin

The lonely tongue hissed

It was another ugly day,

He sat shredding skin.

Reviews

[Lotus Flower]

This gives a picture to the quote "New day brings new things" I see a snake shedding its skin ready for a new day

[Mayank]

Very much, every day brings us something now.

[Matching Socks]

I think of a snake shredding it's skin.
Maybe because it's not happy with who it used to be and wants to remove all trace of that former self and start fresh.

[Mayank]

That's what it meant, leave the ugly stuff and move ahead. Wrote this way so that one can connect it to the any concept they wish too.

[Matching Socks]

Good poem and message for us. :)

[Mayank]

Thank you!

[Gurleen Saluja]

Well expressed. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Mayank]

thanks for the review!

[Sindu]

Well, may be it all won't be ugly after shredding the skin.
Interesting Mayank! Damn.. :D

[Mayank]

Thanks for the read, dear...