If I'm your only hope.... you're f*****g screwed

If I'm your only hope.... you're f*****g screwed

A Poem by KatiePie

You love me for the way I break your heart,
I rearrange it like its fucked up art.

 

I smile when you're hurt,
that's the only happiness your worth.

 

You think I'm digging my grave,

but darling Im digging yours.
Maybe when your dead I'll love you more.

 

You held my breath for me,
I'm ripping my heart off my sleeve.
Back the hell down

and let me breathe.

 

Covered in dirt,
blood dripping from your face,
oh honey your so beautiful these days.

 

This is it.
You've got nothing left to lose.

 

S**t.

 

If I'm your only hope,
your f*****g screwed.

© 2010 KatiePie


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KatiePie
Thank you all so much for your wonderful feedback. :)

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I may come off as slightly sadistic in saying this, but i absolutely ADORE this piece. The force of each line, the power behind it is never rackingly beautiful, and the jarring flow just makes it all the more mind boggling.

What i find very interesting is the vulgarity. The piece is formed around it almost, but does not concentrate on it. Almost like each word spits its own little insult in competition with the actual curses lol.

Kudos to you my friend for this stunning piece!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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wow... what to say... incredible poem.. i feel this poem is somehow darker than your others.. because in this one it seems like you're the "bad guy". hmmm.... interesting! your first 2 lines... they are so f****n powerful!!! awesome poem :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


"You love me for the way I break your heart,
I rearrange it like its fucked up art.

I smile when you're hurt,
that's the only happiness your worth."

gory thoughts !! loved the last stanza "I'm your only hope" !! hahaha

Posted 11 Years Ago


wow what a poem I love this different contrast`s from different view`s of the same meaning love it it`s great am I making sense to you :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Awesome poem! Very cool with the thoughts and words put into each stanza.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Whoa .. poor guy! lol
Honestly it is a good poem very unconventional ... modern i guess you would call it ..it is utter mayhem!

S**t.



If I'm your only hope,
your f*****g screwed.

I think so too!
Ah such is love!

Chloe

Posted 11 Years Ago


Damn this is harsh. Great, but harsh. Sounds like my ex lol.

Posted 11 Years Ago


wow. i found this to be completly un enjoyable. not because it is bad or anything but it is simply not my kind of subject matter not to mention the cursing. however, even if i did not like like it you still create some powerful images in here.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This poem is such a destroyer!!!! It's like death-to-love, death-to-romance, death-to-Romeo-n-Juliet, n' death to hate, too, cuz it's drawing from something deeper than hate. It's like human sacrifice, like cutting somebody's heart out n' burning it to a crisp, like an exorcism! ㋡

Posted 11 Years Ago



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