Falling apart.

Falling apart.

A Poem by May
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Trees grow fast...
And life speeds up...
When the world is at risk,
and the lights fade away.
When darkness is back,
There's still someone standing,
Still as the air,
So hard to believe,
But i can not compare.
This person is strong.
This person is weak.
But as the world starts to collapse.
You hear a sudden creek.
You look to the door.
There is no one there.
Your scared for more,
More you just can't bear.
But as you close the door.
You hear the wind.
and remember,
Whats better than him?


♦Mayy2250

© 2011 May


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I can feel your emotions pour out, awesome write!

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awa so awesome!!! :D

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i really like this poem...

Posted 12 Years Ago


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awesome may! how did you think of it?

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I really like this one very well written Love it :D

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Please leave a review. I like dis one

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