Mistake

Mistake

A Poem by Tamika Finley

You know when you write out a text and before you press send you delete it all..
Trying to convince yourself that you didn't mean it all..
That all of the truth in those words, glad that you didn't speak it because then you'd have to take back it all..
So you erase it all..
Telling yourself "It was a mistake is all"..

© 2015 Tamika Finley


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I like the irony in the poem.
"That all of the truth in those words, glad that you didn't speak it because then you'd have to take back it all". This line is very ironic because sometimes you know that you have to tell the truth to someone, but make the mistake of not doing so, which means that you are in a way lying to yourself.
This poem is great as it is short and very well written.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Tamika Finley

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much!! I am extremely pleased to have known that you could enjoy it. I agree though, th.. read more
Sebastian Falzarano

7 Years Ago

Exactly, and I believe that you nailed that point home.
Vary nice wording!
Keep it up!


Posted 8 Years Ago


Tamika Finley

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)

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Tamika Finley
Tamika Finley

Detroit, MI



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I am from Detroit, Michigan but I'll be moving to Florida to start my college experience in the fall. I love to read and write, listen to music, laugh. Sex and the city, Dexter and that 70's show are .. more..

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