A lover's heart

Is that the cheesiest title I've come up with?

Did you know?
I might kill you while you sleep
Haunt you with loud whispers in your dreams
I'm not as caring as I seem
You know...it is all but my greed

So go.
Leave me
Distance yourself
Before whatever concept you possess of friendship
Falls in disgrace

For I am that corruptive

But oh
You still stay
These shades got you confused
It seems - no matter how dark my gaze is
You're used to stick around me
It astounds me
What creature pursues her own death?
If not known, it should at least be felt
By instinct - and dealt with

But oh
With surprisingly silent calls for my true name
Her tenacious voice finds a door that is unknown to me!
To my tempestuous brain
And as if not naive enough
She dares to take the elevator to my heart!
And although I see a wounded maiden at the corridor
Her charge is far from wavering

Amazing - and disturbing - the amount of disregard for the self in a lover's heart


Truly, a potent poison.

Reviews

[boygene borice]

But oh
With surprisingly silent calls for my true name
Her tenacious voice finds a door that is unknown to me!
To my tempestuous brain
And as if not naive enough
She dares to take the elevator to my heart!
And although I see a wounded maiden at the corridor

Love changes the course of everything

[Coyote Poetry]

This is poetry. Honest, dirty and feeling of truth.
"Amazing - and disturbing - the amount of disregard for the self in a lover's heart
Truly, a potent poison."
Complete poem was very good and I liked the above lines a lot. Thank you Winter for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[winter;lyra]

Thank you for your review, and by the way that line was trouble to me you see, i had the idea of it in my mind but didn't know how to finish it, so spent like 3 minutes thinking about, first it was something like "how much disregard there is in a lover's heart"- i'm glad the result of my struggle pleased someone

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. I liked the line.

[Tony Jordan]

I think that's the cheesiest title ANYONE has ever come up with !!
I also was very intrigued by the pursuer who obviously has a death wish but then again it could just be love - which is the same thing sometimes...
You have me obsessed now with finding any animal that lays its eggs beside itself as a food source for its young !!!
I was innocent until I made your acquaintance Winter !!
Great anti-love love write.

[winter;lyra]

Cmon it could have been just "Love" (dont laugh that was my initial idea) - and this how I fight my tempting urges to write common romance

and the whole core of this poem resides here:

"With surprisingly silent calls for my true name
Her tenacious voice finds a door that is unknown to me!"

(that's secret that im telling because you're a premium reader)

[Tony Jordan]

Yehaaw - I got VIP tickets - tres cool my friend.
I hope you arent going to take out the full price out of my bank account when 12 months is up...
I was only winding you up about the title - it's sound.
Would a tenacious woman get through - Idk - you have those walls priiiiity much solid ;D