Unchained

Unchained

A Poem by Melobldnfr
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Collaborative work with Kublakhan27

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06/26/14


Shackles falling
Like piers of a broken bridge
Collapse of a world unseen
Sentiments made molten
By whispering phalanges
Folding, unfolding, refolding
An explosion
Perhaps insight
And antisound
White noise swimming
In the veins of afterglow
Voices settle in a fetal crunch
A clash of passive patience
And adamant insistence
Cancel out and cave in
Beneath impatient instincts
Somewhere there's a cataclysm
Looming and reloading
Taking a knee on faith and chance
Gathering the courage to make haste
On wind in wings and circumstance
The dance ensues from deep within
Like a reboot
Software made malachite
Light and luminous and quaint
Courage from a pale heart
No longer anticipates nor waits
No rhythm left to wrap around the dreamer
When the asteroid of initiative touches down
Conclusions are all that will remain
A resonance of fate
Like a time capsule
Holds serve in the rebirth
Of introverted vegetation
And the tango of hope and results
Slide a circle around the indecisive psyches
Shielding faith from the gamble
Of the game of chance






© 2014 Melobldnfr


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Melobldnfr

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Due to work and school, I've not been on much. I apologize for not having gotten to read requests, but I do hope ya'll will give this one a look for Steven and me. This is our fourth work together. Of course we can't help but want to share! Inspired by Lacuna Coil's "Shallow Life" CD, I hope ya'll enjoy.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Always a pleasure writing with you my friend :)



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Sounds as though you're breaking out from societal bonds, a reflective & contemplative collaboration...

Of introverted vegetation
And the tango of hope and results

Nice work you two...!

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed it Mrs.R...I guess there is a certain defiance to this one ;P
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

I'd say...'introverted vegetation' reminds me of someone ;) Mwah!
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Haha Yeah, reminds me of someone too...mwah ;) xo
Due to work and school, I've not been on much. I apologize for not having gotten to read requests, but I do hope ya'll will give this one a look for Steven and me. This is our fourth work together. Of course we can't help but want to share! Inspired by Lacuna Coil's "Shallow Life" CD, I hope ya'll enjoy.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Always a pleasure writing with you my friend :)

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Melobldnfr
Melobldnfr

Wichita, KS



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I am always writing, but have not joined a writers' group since The Belle Haven when it was in existence. I loved it and really miss it. So when this site was recommended to me, I couldn't resist. .. more..

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